CAMPING
~By Srimoyee Dutta
The road was dusty
Brown and broken
The path was curvy
That we had taken
The trees were tall
That lined the road
Their leaves would fall
When the cool wind blows
The long shadows
Of the evening
Dissolved into the
Darkness gathering
The moon was round
Full and bright
And on the ground
Fell its silvery light
The twinkling stars
In the sky above
We lay down to observe
With the ones we love.
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Excellent Srimoyee.. The poem creates a very vivid picture of the evening. I like the formatting and short, punchy descriptive statements. Great effort x
ReplyDeletethanks Neil....glad u liked it
DeleteAwesome poem😍😍😍😍.... superb imagination😍😍
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DeleteExcellent shreemoi didi...great job
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Deletethank you so much Anay.....I am really happy you liked it
DeleteThis was the best of them all
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Deletethank you so much for the appreciation
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